[ 原諒 Forgiveness ] (Reviewer: KADOKAWA)
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Contest sponsor KADOKAWA gave detailed advice on 原諒 Forgiveness, an entry for the International Comic/Manga School Contest 2020.
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原諒 Forgiveness
Pen name: 小河少年
School name: Chaoyang University of Technology
Country/Region: Taiwan
Language: Chinese (Traditional)
Overall feedback
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1. The background is optional if you're emphasizing the distance between the two.
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2. This mixture of reality and fantasy is unique to comics, very good.
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3. Showing what waits in the future as with the top two panels would give the page stronger contrast.
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4. The suit is the same black as before, making it harder to understand it’s him grown up. Adding design changes other than short pants > long pants would help.
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