¡Adiós Nonnina! (Critique: Planeta Cómic)
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We received detailed feedback from the sponsor Planeta Cómic on the entry "¡Adiós Nonnina!" in the International Comic/Manga School Contest 2022.
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¡Adiós Nonnina!
Pen name: Lenm
School: Escuela Ola
Country/Region: Argentina
Language: Spanish
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1. It would be easier to read if put in a text box.
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2. He must feel nostalgic remembering Nonna. I think warm colors would be a better fit for this one.
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3. The previous backgrounds are really beautiful. You should make the most of them instead of filling backgrounds with solid colors like this.
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4. Same as the previous point. This is a good example where you want to make use of your beautifully drawn backgrounds.
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