We received detailed feedback from the sponsor Planeta Cómic on the entry "¡Adiós Nonnina!" in the International Comic/Manga School Contest 2022.
Pen name: Lenm
School: Escuela Ola
1. It would be easier to read if put in a text box.
2. He must feel nostalgic remembering Nonna. I think warm colors would be a better fit for this one.
3. The previous backgrounds are really beautiful. You should make the most of them instead of filling backgrounds with solid colors like this.
4. Same as the previous point. This is a good example where you want to make use of your beautifully drawn backgrounds.
International Comic/Manga School Contest 2022 Winners