Dear Living One (Critique: Minto Studio)
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Minto Studio, sponsor of the International Comic/School Contest 2023, gave their critique for the entry, " Dear Living One ".
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Dear Living One
Artist: Yunika Kai
School: University of Washington Bothell
Country/Region: United States of America
Language: English
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I felt that the artist carefully depicted the emotions/actions of the characters and showed a high level of understanding on the theme. The text was easy to read, with the main character and his point of view clearly depicted in the panels. The hands of the characters and the drawings of the animals, such the bird, were drawn very well, and the entire story, including the background, was done with great care. I also saw this artist's aesthetic sense when it changed from day to night and in the detailed subtleties of movement.
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