An Escape Plan (Critique: BookLive)

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BookLive, sponsor of the International Comic/School Contest 2022, gave their critique for the entry, "An Escape Plan."


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An Escape Plan

Pen name: Yunika

School: Glacier peak

Country/Region: United States of America

Language: English


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Pages 4 & 5

1) Show us where the dog and boy are in the room.


2) If you had reversed the order of panel 1 and 2, with the reader moving from the close-up of the light to a view of the whole room, it would’ve made for an easier read.


3) Zoom right into his expression on this panel - he’s making a decision, so this is important. This expression should have as big an impact as possible.


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